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刻意唱反調
Translation: @benkongenglish
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對於親近的家人
心思開放不拘小節的朋友
我愛刻意對他們唱反調
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如果他說咖啡香甜
我就會說 但沒有苦澀就沒有咖啡的滋味
如果他說雨天惱人
我就會說 久等這場雨的植物得滋潤生長
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他若說雨天涼爽
我便心疼曬衣的人 忘了雨具的旅人
他若說苦咖啡好
我便說甜有戀愛的記憶
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凡事凡物圓滿完整
如圓潤飽滿的珍珠
珍珠原只是珍珠
若說了上 就有下
若說了前 就有後
若給了光 就有影
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拙作<你的藍色不是我的藍色>中
我撒下許多問句
推敲一顆顆珍珠
生怕武斷的刃不慎劃下傷痕
問句背後仍可略見我的珍珠
而你的珍珠可是我的珍珠?
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I like to hold the opposite view to my dearest family and friends who are open minded, not drilling on the details.
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If he says the coffee is sweet,
I would say coffee is not coffee without the bitterness.
If he says rainy weather is annoying,
I would say the plants have been waiting for this rain for a long time.
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If he says it’s cool and comfortable on a rainy day,
I would say my thoughts are with people who need to dry their clothes or travellers who forgot to bring their umbrellas
If he says bitter coffee tastes good,
I would say there’s a memory of love in sweet coffee.
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Everything is full and complete like pearls.
Pearls are just pearls.
If you define up, then there’s down
If you define forward, then there’s backward
If there’s light, then there’s shadow
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In my book
I laid down many questions, hoping to see every pearl as what it really is clearly and thoroughly, for fear that a mistake is committed by any arbitrary sentence.
You might vaguely see my pearls behind my questions.
And are my pearls your pearls?
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【王老師寫給你看】用 GRE 分析寫作練邏輯思維、學寫,留學時台灣學生別再當美國學生的後援會啦!
除了「時間不夠」之外,準備 GRE 分析寫作的台灣考生最常碰到的致命傷就是寫了半天「沒有切題、討論到該討論的東西」。而這也是不管原本英文程度如何的學生、還是學霸指數多少的學生,都會遇到的狀況。
雖說很多考生都聽過「主題句」很重要(主題句 = 扣題立場+原因) ,但「實際操作」跟「頭腦裡知道」往往有很大的差距,大概 5 個學生裡有4 個就會偏題。
除此之外,我們的母語中文表達想法時的 vagueness ,也很常讓台灣考生偏題或沒掌握好題目的 scope 。
(e.g. 題目問高等教育對職涯發展的影響,結果學生一直在討論高等教育或是教育 )。
✔︎ 假設今天我們拿到了這個高頻題:
To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
某學生在第二段寫了這樣的主題句:
First of all, the most important characteristics of a society can be defined in a variety of ways.
寫完後,我問了學生:
• 你覺得你這樣有回答到問題嗎?
• 你是如何分析這個題幹 (prompt) 的呢?
• 為什麼一開始就把 "understand" 和 "must study" 這兩個重要的概念給丟掉了了呢?
學生後來又加了一句話,變成 (原文直接呈現,無做調整)
First of all, the most important characteristic of a society can be defined in a variety of ways. Based on the reason, we may not rule out the possibility that the most attracting characteristic in one's heart is not existed in the major city.
• 加了第二句話後,我們又看到了至少4個問題:
(1) important characteristics 怎麼被過度成 attracting characteristics 了呢?(一字代換即離題)
(2) 補 in one's heart 的用意是什麼呢?
(3) 核心概念的 "of a society" 在第二句話消失了
(4) is not existed 為嚴重會導致扣分的文法錯誤(因文章有5處出現一樣的錯誤)。
啊,英文好難啊,你一定這樣想。怎麼會才寫兩句話,就那麼多問題呢?主因來自於大家忽略了好的學術寫作學習,需要系統性的訓練、和練習。很多考生都錯以為範文看一看、點子想一想就可以上場了。
➠ 依照著學生的想法,我試寫了一段:
I partially agree with the statement, as we can certainly gain a deeper understanding of some defining features of a society by studying its major cities, where we can easily observe the socio-cultural events, beliefs, and phenomena that collectively contribute to the construction of the "identity" of a society. However, it should be noted that some of these features that help define a society can ONLY be observed in small towns, as opposed to major cities. Therefore, if we wish to thoroughly--rather than partially--understand the most important characteristics of a society, we must study both big cities and small towns. For instance, ....
在我的改寫中你可以注意到,我沒有一句話會脫離「理解」的這個概念,我也盡可能的讓「社會」這個概念不離開我的寫作 (e.g. socio-cultural events, beliefs, and phenomena; some of these features that help define a society)。
政治、經濟算社會嗎?當然也算。但在時間有限的狀況下,直接寫 social-cultural 是最方便的處理方式。
另外你也可以注意到,我是部分同意了本文。我同意要理解一個社會最重要的核心特色,我們一定要研究大城市。但我在第三句話後面塞了 "thoroughly--rather than partially" 這樣的表達,去闡述如果要「夠全面的了解」只研究大城市不夠。
再回到學生最最一開始的版本:First of all, the most important characteristic of a society can be defined in a variety of ways. 你覺得好嗎?
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【講師介紹】
王梓沅 (GRE V166 / 穩定 AW 5.5, PR 98、TOEFL 117、IELTS 滿分)
哥倫比亞大學應用語言學碩士
賓州大學 (UPenn) 社會語言學碩士
創勝文教共同創辦人、GRE 課程負責人
《GRE 學霸字彙》作者 (2019 眾文圖書出版)
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真没想到看功夫片也会泪流满面。
It was supposed to be the little sister's birthday celebration yesterday and I brought her and the siblings out for a rock climbing session which we all enjoyed thoroughly. I saw how this plucky young lady pushed herself to reach beyond her limits and attempted to scale the hardest wall. Even when she failed, she would ask me "I feel like trying again. Can I go again?" Of course, my dear. I hope you will never give up easily in your life and always have the courage to pursue your dreams.
When I asked her if we could go catch a movie that Papa and I wanted to watch after dinner, she said sweetly "Sure, okay!". Yup, thankful for kids who are willing and happy to watch movies with us since young. So we booked tickets for a late night show at Shaw Jewel at 9:20pm so the hubby could rush to join us after work. Oh, what show did we watch? Yup, you guessed it - Ip Man 4: The Finale.
I remember that the hubby and I watched 叶问 3 in 2015 with the baby boy when he was just a week old. We had watched the first two movies too and were impressed not just by the fighting scenes but the touching story of how this 一代宗师 fought not for fame or power but for justice and equality. In this finale movie, what struck a chord with me was the theme of parental love. I practically choked on my tears at the part where his defiant teenager son was only willing to talk to him when he realised that his father was dying. And guess what? My firstborn told me she cried at that scene too. Awwww. 这母女怎么那么容易流泪呢...
So we all learnt a lesson together from our experiences yesterday and that is to never stop trying, to know that you are capable of amazing things and to never let others define your worth. You are who you are.
P.S. It's Christmas Eve today and we are busy wrapping presents and getting our home ready for a party tomorrow! Yup, another party! It's gonna be the last one for this year and a great way to end off 2019 for us. Have a wonderful Christmas Eve today too, people, and let's all spread some love and joy together. ♥️
#ahappymum #ahappymumtalks #moviedate #ipman4 #moviegoers #birthdaycelebration #familytime #aslongaswearetogether #youarewhoyouare
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