#3D英文筆記術分析
【真實語料】Elon Musk 很霸氣,但 Tesla 的實習拒信很「客氣」
「我看過 Netflix、Tesla、Airbnb、Salesforce、Google、Uber 等各大企業的求職拒絕信。沒有任何一家公司在 “rejection letter” 裡用了 reject 這個字。」
我的課堂中幾乎有 8 成都是上班族,因此這句話是我在課堂和企業內訓時,常常跟他們分享的。我自己在學習時,很喜歡用真實的語料。所以我在教書時,與其給學生看一堆英文書中「假的模板」、或是做個表格比較「refuse / reject / decline」,我常常厚臉皮去找在海外的前學生,請他們分享給我「#台灣留學生用血淚換來的」真實語料,用在課程當中。
日前學生跟我分享了一封 Tesla 的實習拒絕信。信件是由「最不祥」的 Thank you....開頭的。😂
► Thank you for taking the time to interview with Tesla and for being patient throughout this process.
真正拒絕的那句話,囉哩八囉(=客氣) 地說了:
►...competition for roles at Tesla is very tight and you have not been selected at this time to advance further in the recruitment cycle for the intern position.
大多的公司還會使用 "We have decided not to move forward at this time."
直接一點的公司會在一開始用出 #慣用句頭: We regret to inform you that...
回到剛剛的那句話。當我們運用 3D 英文筆記術來分析,根據前半段句我們可以抄下 Thank you for taking the time to… 這個含有一個 #詞義搭配 (take the time to) 跟一個 #文法搭配 (interview with) 的「#慣用句頭」。
・根據 #Linggle 語料庫 (筆記術課程會教怎麼用),我們還可以看到:
► Thank you for taking the time and effort to V.
以及衍伸用法:
► Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedules to V. / for sth
而 Tesla 也特別用了 throughout the process (而不是 in the process),來表達一種 #從頭到尾 的感覺。 這種徹頭徹尾感、不管是時間還是空間,都可以表現。
再次根據 #Linggle 語料庫 (筆記術課程會教怎麼用),我們可以看到:throughout the year (通年、一整年)、throughout the city (整個城市)、throughout the process (一整個過程) 等等的延伸用法。
除了 Linggle 語料庫,課程當中也會教怎麼使用另外一個 Netspeak 語料庫輔助 3D英文筆記術的抄寫。 我很喜歡 Netspeak 的 slogan: One word leads to another. 我覺得學習英文就應該是如此。
3D 英文筆記術的課程的募資進入倒數階段囉!感謝大家的支持,已經超過 3300% 的募資率了!我會帶給你們這輩子最不一樣、最有效的學習英文體驗。#謝謝 那麼多願意把英語學習之路交給我的你和妳:)
► 3D 筆記術課程連結:https://hahow.in/cr/ntealex-3dnotetaking
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林作x全職獵人久保Job Application Email範例
以下範例可以作為各位寫Job Application Email的參考。
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「兩者皆是一場吸引力的游戲」
好多讀者詢問:Job Application Email跟Cover Letter 以後,兩者的差別在哪?
簡單來説, Job Application Email 是 Cover Letter 簡化的版本。文中的都是Cover Letter 裏的精華,用最少的篇幅和最精簡的方式寫出來。
也可以說,Job Application Email 就好像出席一場派對。 在場的人數非常多, 沒有太多的機會去深入認識。 大家通常在互相交換卡片之後,不會有時間聊太多。可是在短短的時間,卻可以對於對方留下第一印象。如果對方沒有閃亮點,亦不會和你再聯絡。 這跟 Job Application Email 一樣,你要在短短的一、兩分鐘内讓HR還有Recruiter 對你有興趣,不然他們有可能Cover Letter 跟履歷都不看,直接跳過去下一位應徵者。
Cover Letter 就好像出席一場極速約會。 在這種場合裏,需要在時間限制之内,通常三到五分鐘,跟對方交談。鈴聲響起之前,你還是要透過對談跟不同的方式吸引坐你對面的那一位再獲得她的青睞,才會有後續的機會。你需要戰略性的,在有限時間針對性的表現自己最有優勢的地方,然後稍為鞏固這個印象來吸引她。可是你又不能表現得太飢渴也不能太隨遇而安。可是也要適當的留白,增添神秘感, 讓她有更想要認識你的衝動。 Cover Letter 就像這樣, 要表現卻不能太超過。要適當的留意下白,不然面試的時候會沒有發揮的機會。
下面這個Job Application Email例子,屬於我們頗為正常的一份。裡面一切的個人資訊已經被編輯,但屬於一個真實案例,客戶是來自於酒店業,是一位工作年資大約10年的才俊,他希望能夠到一個在香港屬於最大的平台,從事他這些年來專門負責的工作,於是找了我們幫忙:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to apply for the captioned position. Having spent X years building up a work profile with one of the industry leaders, I believe I am a strong candidate for the position with my years of varied experience in this industry.
I graduated from the XXX with a First Class Bachelor of XXX degree in 20XX, majoring in XXX. During my studies, I was awarded College Head’s List for my outstanding academic performance, an honour bestowed to only around X students per year out of a year of XXX. Upon graduation, I joined my present employer, XXX, being my first choice.
I relish new challenges. To that end, and to broaden my horizons, I was chosen as the only Hong Kong candidate to move across to their XXX branch in order to help further honing my skills and experience. My work experience at XXX has given me a truly international exposure. Wishing to be be exposed to the the biggest market for XXX, I then applied to be internally transferred to the XXX branch, named the Best XXX and one of the Top XXX in the World. Despite the different staff naming systems in XXX and XXX, being currently a XXX in XXX, not only did I move from one of the smallest portfolios in XXX
Umbrella of XXX to possibly the biggest, but also was I given bigger responsibilities, managing a significantly bigger budget as well as leading a bigger team of staff.
The overriding personality trait of mine is that of a buckled down attitude. In my level of position, I believe such an outlook is key to doing our job well, and it is what I inculcate into the many members of staff I have helped to train over the years. Indeed, this attitude leads me to always stay focused, be happy to admit mistakes, get rid of negativity in and around my team, be hard-working and be keen to learn. I believe my qualities would certainly make me a valuable asset of your company.
Please find the attached resume and do not hesitate to contact me should you require any further information. I am looking forward to discuss my attributes and experiences with you at an interview, and I look forward to hopefully contributing my skillset to you in the future.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Xxx
這一封Job Application Email吸引的原因有幾個:
1. 平時HR經常看到的只是簡單兩句的Email,等同浪費機會,白寫。每一份文件都是展現自己的機會,所以必須把你的故事講出來。
2. 但對比於Cover Letter,必須更簡單地去講,不能完整,更不能囉嗦。所以這裡,真的就只能勾勒出你的經歷,把最厲害的一點講出來,把最亮麗的工作履歷秀出來,其他的一概省略。
3. Email和寫信實際上沒有什麼文法上的分別,正式求職的就更不應該有分別,所以第一段和最後一段,開頭和結尾都必須很保守。
4. ‘Best’, ‘biggest’, ‘top’, ‘only’ 這些字眼,不能吝嗇。你不自信,不炫耀自己,別人也就沒有必要把你看得更高。當然,不單是把這些字眼拋出來,更要包裝整個quality有多麼特別突出。這就要交給我們了。
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林作x全職獵人久保Cover Letter Carving範例
以下範例可以作為各位寫Cover Letter的參考。
Fillture Career Coaching的客戶裏面,有工作年資尚淺的,也有工作年資超過20年的。他們也是來自於各行各業。目前來說,沒有哪一行或哪一個輩份的最多。我們不認為有最好的格式 - 每個人都會根據年齡、資歷、行業以及個人特點而有所不同。共同點,就只是幾樣:最好的英文,最清晰的表達,最真摯的情感,以及最有自我和自信的一面。下面這個Cover Letter例子,屬於我們頗為正常的一份。裡面一切的個人資訊已經被編輯,但屬於一個真實案例,客戶是來自於金融業年資少於10年的年輕人,他希望能夠到一個更大的平台,從事他這幾年來專門負責的工作,於是找了我們幫忙:
Dear Sir/ Madam,
With nearing X years of successful experience in the wealth management industry, I am firmly in the belief that the time is ripe for me to move on to what is considered one of the largest XXX in Hong Kong. I am confident that I possess the qualities necessary to thrive at such an outstanding company and in particular, become a valuable prospect as investment analyst in the Investment Department.
My investment journey as an analyst at fund distribution platforms, hedged funds and wealth management companies have honed my Top-down and Bottom-up approach as well as having personal investment conviction. Indeed, I believe the latter strength is the key to my achievement thus far – I take pride in being independent-minded, which is becoming increasingly important in this ever-expanding complex financial market. The valuable experience at XXX helped me to develop my personal market belief through mutual funds training and provided me a hands-on training in Bloomberg Terminal ( BBG).
From there, notwithstanding a tempting offer from XXX, my intention to move on to bigger and better things in mutual funds and hedge funds led me to secure a precious experience at XXX as XXX, which has provided me a perspective in practical option-trading strategies and the operational side of running a hedged fund. Throughout my time at the company, various stocks were identified and individuals’ fair value via Discount Cashflow model ( DCF ) were calculated. I provided constant economic updates to the Portfolio manager. My particularly proud achievement was to have successfully predicted that XXX would plummet significantly, a full week before it actually happened when no one in Hong Kong saw the same. This is due to my wide-than-usual horizon in terms of the information platforms I would survey. I am uniquely adept at looking into mainstream and niche mainland financial websites and other channels for the most updated information as well as gossips. This is the source of my being able to often come up with contrarian views. On the operation side of XXX, I was also responsible for calculating daily NAV to the portfolio manager.
Lastly, in my current job, being part of the investment team, my duty is to oversee the company’s XXX and set up investment outlook to our XXX. Timely reports and Top-down analysis on various economies were produced to the investment team committee and sales. Last year, I was honoured to play a notable role in securing a XXX return for the portfolio, beating the Hang Seng Index by XXX, and was rewarded to speak as the company’s sole representative on behalf of the research team at XXX 2019, which I greatly enjoyed. Finally, I personally boosted the client base by XXX, a rate well above average in the space of X months.
I look forward to having further discussions with you in an interview. Please contact me at xxx@gmail.com or at +852xxxxxxxx if you have any further enquiries about my academic background and work experience. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
XXX
這份 Cover Letter 的厲害之處在於幾個地方:
1. 英語的掌握能力,明顯比一般只是文法沒錯(而我們收到的初稿絕大部份甚至不會能夠做到這點)要好很多,於是句子的組織、節奏感都更像是一個native speaker。而風格上並不是死板的官方英文,有在一些位置故意地更談話feel一點,務求不虛情假意,更真摯。
2. 一些動詞和形容詞的選擇,也是讓這份看起來更加讓人印象深刻。即使內容不是很特別,給人的感受都變得更主動、更自信。
3. 要分享工作經驗,但細節留給CV。這裏是炫耀自己有多少功績的地方,要故事性地展現一些獨有的成就,無論是多大多小,給人感覺你是有自己的位置的。
4. 最後,要做一個有Edge的人。這封信有著強烈的個人定位,明顯有血有肉,知道自己的想法是什麼、態度是什麼。
我們認為,一份好的Cover Letter可以令到HR更加快過濾你,讀完之後可以理解你是一個什麼樣的求職者。甚至在腦海入面已經勾劃出你的影像、你的故事、你的目的。一份好的Cover Letter能夠立體地勾劃你,可以令到HR更加容易去和Line Manager描述、推薦你。
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