IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Giải Cam 12 Test 5
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Đề bài: Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Đây là dạng câu hỏi là Discussion có quan điểm cá nhân, người viết cần thảo luận cả hai khía cạnh, quan điểm và sau đó thể hiện xem mình nghiêng về quan điểm ý kiến nào nhé.
Lưu ý rằng đề bài có hạn chế chúng ta về những academic knowledge thôi nên khi đưa ra ví dụ, hãy định hướng câu trả lời của mình hướng về topic này.
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Theo mình thấy có rất ít nơi chia sẻ những bài viết liên quan đến chủ đề Information do đó các bạn khó có cơ hội được tiếp cận với nguồn từ vựng chất lượng thuộc chủ đề này.
Dưới đây là một đề trích từ cuốn Cam 12, Test 5 và bài mẫu band 8.0 chắc chắn sẽ hữu ích cho bạn trong quá trình luyện IELTS Writing.
Đề bài:
Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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business email sample 在 Syrena- Singapore's First Mermaid Facebook 的最佳貼文
THIS IS NOT OKAY.
I am absolutely livid right now. It's not OK to use intellectual property without permission. It's not OK to use people's life stories without permission. And it's DEFINITELY not OK to get people to play someone without their permission.
Here's the run-down:
A while back, a group who was part of the Creator Collective - Asia programme contacted me. They said that they wanted to use my story as Singapore's First Mermaid to create a video and "headline a pitch to Singapore Tourism Board. STB is looking for ideas for a campaign to get Singaporeans to buy into the latest tagline for their campaign, "Passion made Possible". They said that "this is a pitch video to STB, it will be very short and it won't be broadcast or made public... We get real clients like Lazada, Chan Brothers etc, and my group has Singapore Tourism Board as a client."
STB was unaware of these micro-happenings and is not at fault.
I sent them some underwater footage taken of me by myself and my contacts, as a sample for what filming underwater with me would look like.
Based on this knowledge that it was a pitch to STB and the impression the contact gave that it was an official pitch and prospective job, I agreed to meet up with them to find out more about the project.
It was only when I met them in person that the group clarified that this "pitch" was part of a campaign simulation competition held for all the Creator Collective groups, and was a student initiative.
I was unable to commit to the project and didn't hear back from the group again.
... Fast forward to today, when I realized with a shock that the group went ahead to produce their final presentation video using my story. Using my underwater videos, my IP. They had also taken some videos about me from YouTube - the video IP for these lay with other news companies who hadn't given permission either. Note that I'd not heard anything from the group in ages and had not in any way been informed that they were going ahead with my story. Neither had I given permission for my mermaiding videos to be used. None of the videos were credited to me, giving the impression that the group had filmed the underwater sequences themselves and that the impersonator (read on) was really me.
[/edit: we've realized that the group also snagged and ripped some videos of myself and the Singapore Mermaid School and our clients off YouTube. This means that 1) not only are there multiple infractions because all those people were featured in the group's presentation without knowledge or consent, but also that 2) Channel NewsAsia 's intellectual property has been similarly compromised, as one of the clips was created and published by them as a feature on us]
To top that all off - they roped in a random person to impersonate me in a faux-interview. She appears in the video subtitled and credited as me: "Cara/Syrena: Founder of the Singapore Mermaid School". Artistic liberties were also taken with my life story: e.g I have never lived by the ocean.
The real kicker? Using this video about my life story, my IP, and my abused, misrepresented image, this project was presented to STB (an organization I had hoped to work with in the future) and bagged the group 1st Prize in this year's Creator Collective competition and a $7000 grant cheque to fund their future projects.
Adding to all that, this has since been published on:
- YouTube (since taken down, but not before it garnered views)
- Instagram
- major news sites such as Straits Times
- Business Times + Business Times' Twitter
- and in print newspapers.
Here is the link to an album containing all of the evidence: https://drive.google.com/open?id=18auehI29f_bm5YCBU-YkrxC2A4Wh7h9q
We cropped out their IG usernames and blurred their eyes because I can't help being nice.
There might be other media outlets running the story of the win that I'm not aware of as well.
Call it a miscommunication all you want, but 1) to use someone's life story without permission 2) to use someone's IP without permission 3) to impersonate/allow impersonation without permission or a disclaimer is wrong in all books.
I'm not usually a confrontational person. I don't enjoy drama. But on the behest of the people in my life who have all supported me and journeyed with me through this hard-earned career, I have to speak out. To defend my name. My reputation. This brand I've built from the bottom up over years. My image, which I've honed to the standard of excellence that myself, my school, and my mermaids are known for locally and internationally.
I hope that the right people see this, and do the right things to correct this wrong. This shouldn't have happened.
UPDATE 1: I have posted a video to my page talking about recent updates.
UPDATE 2: Article posted by Rice Media, detailing both sides of the story. A highly detailed account - read it and decide for yourself what to think of all this. http://ricemedia.co/current-affairs-features-students-stole-work-impersonated-me-won-7000/
UPDATE 3: CC has finally connected me with STB. Her email, however, continues to victim blame. She also has attempted to change tack to claim that the phone call and request to silence my post was her own personal request. This is false. She made it extremely clear in 2 separate phonecall occasions to myself and my business partner that 1) STB had complained to CC that my post presents STB in a bad light and 2) It was STB who had told CC to tell me to take my post down.
UPDATE 4: I responded with an email addressing the victim blaming and the continued allegations CC/BNM continues to make.
I said that although I have considerable legal grounds, I want to give the groups a chance to voluntarily make reparations. I simply asked for 2 official public apologies: one by CC/BNM and one by Magnificent 7.
I also clearly stated that these 2 apologies would have to be vetted by me before circulation. (lest the 2 parties miss out or misrepresent certain events and clauses)
UPDATE 5 (MAJOR): STB replied this email, stating that they treat IP theft and impersonation very seriously. They also stated that they did NOT complain about my post to Joanne of CC/BNM, and never contacted her to tell me to take my post down.
UPDATE 6 (MAJOR) : I have received word from a reporter contacting me for my side of the story, that CC has gone ahead to issue an official statement cum press release focusing on winner disqualification.
Note that it's been radio silence from them to me.
UPDATE 7: I have posted my final statement on my page.
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❋♥ 聊天時間 ♥
這次終於學懂長話短說?
每次都好開心拍完就清走一堆空瓶
然後每次剪片都好崩潰 一定勁長篇
再然後打infobox打到懷疑人生?
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一直以來,我收到其中一道熱門問題就是:為什麼你一直都能保持動力?例如當年考 #DSE 、考 #IELTS 、學英文可以堅持温習多年,大學時期又能追求自己的職業目標?你的動力到底是從何而來?相信坊間和網上可能會提供很多『提升動力』的實際方法,一步步教你建立自己的動力,但我今日分享的內容是從心態的角度出發。雖然分享比較個人化,未必能套用在每個人身上,但希望大家可以從我的經歷和心態中得到一些啟發~
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01:04 為什麼我不認為學習是痛苦的?
03:00 考試就像遊戲打怪?!
04:01 外在動機和內在動機
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09:25 為什麼心態才是最重要
11:02 結語
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“Connecting the Dots” - Steve Jobs - 在香港感覺是很難做到的事情,畢竟我們從讀書時期,所有 “out-syl"(不在課程或考試大綱中的學習內容)或者非考試技巧類的知識,往往不會受到我們的重視;我自己也是抱著這樣的心態,可是回顧過去做的事情,有時候令我成功的,往往就是一些「不經意」的事件;趁出門前,一邊拍Get Ready With Me(新嘗試哈哈,鼓起了很大的勇氣才敢不用filter和素顏示人),一邊和大家聊聊這個話題~
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- 17歲時第一次應考雅思 (IELTS) 便取得滿分9分成績
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- 曾於多家金融機構及投資銀行實習,尚未畢業已獲大型美資投行聘請為全職投資銀行分析師 (Investment Banking Analyst)
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