HƯỚNG DẪN CHI TIẾT CÁCH VIẾT IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - DẠNG DISCUSSION (KÈM BÀI MẪU & TỪ VỰNG)
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Với mỗi đề mình đều bắt đầu bằng việc dịch đề và phân tích đề. Sau đó hướng dẫn các bạn cách paraphrase và lên outline chi tiết.
Các bạn lưu ý, luôn luôn phải lên outline trước khi bắt tay vào viết bài đó nhé!
Hôm nay chúng mình cùng làm một đề Writing Task 2, dạng Discussion nhé:
ĐỀ BÀI
Many people say that universities should only offer young students with the highest marks, others say they should accept people of all ages, even if they did not do well.
Discuss both views and give your opinions.
- Dịch câu hỏi: Nhiều người nghĩ rằng các trường đại học chỉ nên chọn những học sinh trẻ có điểm số cao, nhưng một số người khác lại cho rằng các trường Đại học nên chấp nhận học sinh ở mọi lứa tuổi cho dù là họ không có kết quả học tập tốt. Thảo luận 2 ý kiến này và đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân của mình.
- Dạng câu hỏi: Discussion with opinion. Câu hỏi đưa ra hai ý kiến trái ngược nhau về việc chỉ nên chấp nhận những học sinh xuất sắc ở độ tuổi trẻ, hãy cho phép tất cả học sinh ở mọi lứa tuổi học Đại học.
Nhiệm vụ của người viết như sau:
• Giải thích cả 2 ý kiến. Vì sao một số người lại nghĩ rằng chỉ nên chấp nhận những học sinh xuất sắc ở độ tuổi trẻ (đưa ra lợi ích), và tại sao những người khác lại cho rằng nên cho phép tất cả học sinh ở mọi lứa tuổi học Đại học (đưa ra lợi ích).
• Đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân đồng ý với ý kiến 1 hay
CẤU TRÚC BÀI VIẾT
Introduction: chỉ nên viết 2 câu trong phần mở bài
• Giới thiệu topic bằng cách paraphrase lại câu hỏi
Many people say that universities should only offer to young students with highest marks, others say they should accept people with all ages, even if they did not do well
• Many people say that = Many people think that = It is commonly believed that…
• University = University education = Tertiary education = Higher education
• Student with highest marks = Students with good grades = A good academic result = Top students = High-ranking students = High-potential individuals
• Accept SB = Make accessible to ST/SB = Be opened up for SB
• People with all ages = Everyone regardless of their age
• Not do well = Not perform well = Regardless of learning capacity = Poor academic results
• Giới thiệu 2 ý kiến và đưa ra quan điểm cá nhân của mình
Question: Discuss both views and give your opinions
Answer: While many people think that + đưa ra ý kiến 1, I am more convinced that + đưa ra ý kiến 2 cũng là quan điểm cá nhân của mình
Body 1:
• Topic Sentence: Paraphrase lại ý kiến 1
• Supporting Idea 1: Kết quả học tập tốt (A good academic result) → phản ánh khả năng của học sinh và quyết định liệu rằng họ có phù hợp với môi trường học ở Đại học không → Nếu học sinh không có đủ kiến thức (not to acquire sufficient knowledge) khi học cấp 3, họ có thể không phù hợp với chương trình học Đại học
• Supporting Idea 2: Tập trung vào những học sinh giỏi ở độ tuổi trẻ (high – ranking students at a young age) → Chính phủ có thể tập trung nguồn ngân sách vào việc phát triển những người có chất lượng cao (high quality personnel) bằng cách cải thiện môi trường học tập tốt hơn (a more favorable learning environment) với chất lượng giáo dục cải thiện (improved education quality), năng lực nghiên cứu tốt hơn (better research capacity), và trang thiết bị tốt hơn (better facilities)
Body 2:
• Topic Sentence: Paraphrase lại ý kiến 2 và nói quan điểm cá nhân của mình là ủng hộ quan điểm này
• Supporting Idea 1: Giáo dục là yếu tố then chốt đằng sau sự thay đổi về thu nhập (income mobility) và sự thay đổi về xã hội (social mobility) → nên được cung cấp cho tất cả mọi người
• Supporting Idea 2: Học sinh cấp 3 phải học rất nhiều môn → Một vài môn có kết quả thấp (poor academic result), nhưng một vài môn khác lại có điểm rất cao (extraordinarily high)→ Học sinh nên được cho phép phát huy những thế mạnh (take advantage of strengths) để tham gia vào các khóa học chuyên sâu ở trường Đại học
Conclusion: Tổng kết và trả lời lại câu hỏi, paraphrase lại câu số 2 trong phần introduction
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