((Your Silent Neighbor))
opening tomorrow New Museum , New York.
new video debut
"If you've ever stepped into the supernatural world during a hike,
or have fotten lost in the parking lot and couldn't find the exit,
or have stared into the eyes of a black chicken standing outside your door through the peephole late at night.
Then you would know how I feel."
個展
((你的沉默鄰居))
明天紐約New Museum開幕
同場加映新作
<唔好意思遲咗覆>
近年發現說出"唔好意思遲咗覆"這句說話的次數倍增,
每次email大概都是這句開場白。
直至有次給字花寫的專欄過了死線還未想好,
但又有感每次用同一句說話之單調,
只好嘗試動之以情,
說我被困在某女人的小腿內,
腿內Wi-Fi微弱,
我出到來再算吧。
遲覆的原因我經已交出,
但我知道你不會相信,
因你只想到自己。
同時也有2部Youtube影片,追蹤數超過67萬的網紅kyarypamyupamyu channel,也在其Youtube影片中提到,2021/8/17 Release 🔊New Song🔊原点回避(GENTENKAIHI)🔊Listen Now! 🔊 🎧https://lnk.to/GENTENKAIHIiD 今年デビュー10周年を迎えるきゃりーぱみゅぱみゅが、約1年2ヶ月ぶりとなる有観客をライブを開催。10周年イヤー最初の...
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疫情持續,但學習不能中斷。
今天與同學分享Presentality最新的寫作技巧分析。
英文寫作絕對不只是將單字句型套用在模板上就好了。
用專業的寫作方法讓你的寫作有意義!
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最近疫情再次高升,駐台灣的Bloomberg 記者寫了一篇文章:
Complacency Let Covid Erode Taiwan’s Only Line of Defense
自滿讓 COVID 侵蝕了台灣唯一的防線
文章:https://bloom.bg/3ywfKA9
我們來看看Bloomberg寫的一篇好文章:
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📌 結構:當調查故事寫
這篇文章讀起來一點都不無聊,不只是因為它攸關我們的社會,也是因為他在結構上,就像一個偵探調查的故事:
1. Opening line: 戲劇性開場,不要無聊
2. Background: 然後再給簡短背景
3. Key moment: 影響後續發展最關鍵的事件
4. Outcome: 這個決定的後果
5. What to do: 國際專家建議應該怎麼做
6. But.....: 可惜,可能做不到
7. Details: 後面的部分,再進入細節
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📌 最好的開頭 = 簡短有力、抓住注意力、又可以做結論
我們先來看開頭三段:
All the virus had to do was get through the border.
Until this week, Taiwan’s Covid-19 containment appeared to be so effective that virtually no other defenses were put in place: few tests, no local surveillance to pick up undetected infection and close to zero vaccination.
Lauded as one of most successful places in the world at containment, a high level of complacency about the risks had set in among both the public and authorities. Covid-19 seemed to be something happening only in the outside world.
如果是我們認識大部分的人來寫,通常會從第二段開始。為什麼?因為總是要解釋背景嘛!而且任何人在研究這個議題,都會從背景開始教育自己,所以就不自覺的從背景寫起。
但他們不這麼做,反而以一個吸引人的方式開頭:
All the virus had to do was get through the border.
這個開頭有幾個優點:
•簡短一行,讓人不會看到一大坨字就不想要繼續看
•有故事性:好像病毒是一個入侵的敵人
•又是結論:怎麼會發生?一旦病毒溜進來了,就會發生
這種是非常理想的開頭:因為就算我沒有時間看剩下的,也會理解到文章的重點:邊境守的很嚴,但是裡面很鬆散。
第一句,下的太好了。
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📌 給一點背景後,馬上提到關鍵一個決定
記者們解釋背景的篇幅,就只有三段。他們很快就鎖定關鍵的一個 (錯誤) 決定:
The virus’s opening was an ill-fated decision on April 15 to shorten quarantine for airline crew to just three days, as carriers struggled to operate their cargo lines with staff undergoing 14-day isolation periods. Infected pilots introduced a more transmissible U.K. variant, whose spread was then accelerated through a network of “hostess bars” -- places both staff and patrons were reluctant to be associated with, making contact tracing more difficult.
如果他們再花 1-2 段解釋背景,文章就會變得有點無聊,會流失讀者。
所以他們在這裡提到關鍵的失策。
📌 Note:寫作語氣相對正式
這幾位記者,也許是受 Bloomberg 整體風格影響,還算正式。
從哪邊看的出來呢?
The virus's opening was an ill-fated decision...
輕鬆口語化的文章,絕對不會用 "ill-fated" (ill 就是生病/不好嘛,fate 就是命運,所以就是「之後的命運不好」的一個決定。這是一個很不錯的字就是了。
另一個例子,看這句:
Infected pilots introduced a more transmissible U.K. variant, whose spread was then accelerated through a network of “hostess bars” -- places both staff and patrons were reluctant to be associated with, making contact tracing more difficult.
哇噻,尤其 "reluctant to be associated with",好。。。委婉啊
怎麼樣寫的平易近人一點?
Infected pilots carried a more transmissible U.K. variant, which then spread quickly through a network of "hostess bars". This also made contact tracing harder — because staff and customers didn't want to admit that they worked at or visited these bars.
稍微長一點,但是用的字都比較直白簡單。
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📌 強調嚴重性
這個失策跟破口,有多嚴重的後果?
Taiwan reported 267 new infections Wednesday, bringing the total over the past few days to 1,291 -- a small number in global terms but an astonishing one in a place that, before May 1, had posted just 1,132 cases during the entire pandemic.
The surge from zero to quadruple digits signals that undetected spread has been occurring for months, and concern is now growing that Taiwan will go the way of other cautionary tales, from the outbreak last year in Australia’s Victoria state that took a brutal three-month lockdown to quell, to Thailand’s ongoing surge driven by prison clusters.
"The surge from zero to quadruple"
這邊,寫的非常好,因為雖然不是真正的 rhyme,還是聽起來很近,所以有節奏感。
"Go the way of other cautionary tales" 又是一個文筆很好的寫法,就是「變得跟那些拿來警惕大家的故事一樣」的意思。
但是記得,別在聊天的時候用這些啊,對方會覺得你很奇怪。
這邊他們把最壞的可能性帶進來:就是台灣可能變得跟那些 cautionary tales 一樣。
這邊也讓讀者緊張起來。
但因為他們寫 "concern is now growing...",又沒有說「誰的 concern」,所以應該要馬上帶具有可信度的 source 進來:
“If they have 300 diagnosed cases, they have 3,000 cases in the community -- they just don’t know it.” said Gregory Poland, a virologist and director of the Mayo Clinic’s Vaccine Research Group. “It’s going to require a hard lockdown, what’s called a circuit-breaker approach, and then getting the vaccine out as quickly as they can.”
這樣就比較有可信度了,也指出一個解決的可能性:lock down,然後疫苗。
但是...
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需要完整分析的同學請留言「看 Bloomberg學資深記者如何寫文章」。
我們每天都在看跟英文溝通/寫作有關的東西,如果想要透過這些「閱讀筆記」跟我們一起看,可在 FB 追蹤我們:https://www.facebook.com/presentality/
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Presentality系列文章:
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📌 英文演講實用的結構與技巧
https://bit.ly/2PHu3Ax
📌 在演講中的四種敘述角度
https://bit.ly/39tNUtv
📌 詩人Amanda Gorman的英文演講技巧
https://bit.ly/39sI3on
📌 從 Most Dangerous Place 文章,看經濟學人寫作邏輯
https://bit.ly/3htqJEs
📌 寫作的終極目標是「提供價值」
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new opening意思 在 kyarypamyupamyu channel Youtube 的最佳解答
2021/8/17 Release
🔊New Song🔊原点回避(GENTENKAIHI)🔊Listen Now! 🔊
🎧https://lnk.to/GENTENKAIHIiD
今年デビュー10周年を迎えるきゃりーぱみゅぱみゅが、約1年2ヶ月ぶりとなる有観客をライブを開催。10周年イヤー最初のライブということもあって、きゃりーの気合いも充分。ライブ当日は昼公演・夜公演の2公演が実施され、衣装やセットリストも違い両公演ともそれぞれ楽しめるコンサートとなった。「GREAT INVITATION」〜華麗なる招待〜をコンセプトに、モノクロの70年代の映画のようなオープニングVTRが流れると、パーティをまちわびるきゃりーの姿が映される。1年ぶりに華麗なる招待の電話が鳴るときゃりーがカラーに色づきライブの幕が開く。コロナ禍であろうと絶対に楽しいパーティにするという、きゃりーぱみゅぱみゅの強い意思がみなぎったライブとなった。なお、本公演は新型コロナウイルス感染症防止に配慮した形で行われ、観客はハンドクラップやペンライトを振ってライブを楽しんだ。
また本公演の一部を無料映像サービス「GYAO!」ならびにソフトバンクのコンテンツ配信サービス「5G LAB」にて独占配信中!
GYAO!:https://yahoo.jp/jk61ht
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Kyary Pamyu Pamyu to celebrate the 10th anniversary of her debut
Kyary Pamyu Pamyu celebrates the 10th anniversary of her debut this year and held live performance for the first time in a year and two months on 17 April 2021. Since it was the first live of the 10th anniversary year, she was full of spirit. The live consisted of matinee and an evening shows where you could enjoy unique costumes and music setlists respectively.
When the 70's movie-like monochrome opening VTR is played, the appearance of Kyary getting excited about the party is projected. As she received a great invitation phone call of a party, the world turned colorful, and the show began under the theme of GREAT INVITATION. Despite the uncertain time during the Covid-19 pandemic, she determined to make the party fun. The shows were held under Covid-19 restrictions and the audience enjoyed the live performance by handclapping and waving penlights.
You can stream a part of the live exclusively on the free video service "GYAO!" and Softbank's content distribution service "5G LAB"!
Information
KYARY PAMYU PAMYU PREMIUM LIVE GREAT INVITATION
GYAO!:https://yahoo.jp/jk61ht
VENUE:EX THEATER ROPPONGI
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◆きゃりーぱみゅぱみゅ 公式サイト http://kyary.asobisystem.com
new opening意思 在 唔熟唔食 Cook King Room Youtube 的最佳貼文
【低溫焗斧頭扒】https://youtu.be/AQWDj6pGZiY
【慢煮威靈頓牛】https://youtu.be/10-qq4U1EXo
【法式紅酒雞】https://youtu.be/G_8yjGajnEU
【牛油果香草雞肉沙律】https://youtu.be/mS45bruiI0A
大家玩過Cooking Mama未? 今次我哋用下遊戲入面嘅做法搓啲肉丸出嚟去做個大家都鍾意嘅Party Food,所以如果我之前嘅聖誕食譜太麻煩,相信今次呢個會相對容易得多。但係又唔會係最簡易嘅果隻。
意粉嘅配搭好隨意,可以轉用長通粉,扁意粉都冇問題。
再祝大家有個愉快嘅聖誕,聖誕快樂!
PS. 大家鐘唔鐘意個新片頭?2018即將完結,2019轉吓新意思等大家睇得冇咁悶,希望各位來年支持。多謝。
Have you ever played Cooking Mama in the DS before? This recipe will be doing some similar steps according to the game itself to produce some homemade beef balls for the pasta. If you find my previous Chrimstas videos are too complicated for you, this might be something easier I hope. However won't be the easiest way to some of you lol.
Feel free to chang the type of pasta such as Penne or Linguine.
I here wish you guys a great Christmas again.
PS. do you like the new opening? 2018 has come to an end, I hope by changing a new style of the opening can bring you something new for the coming 2019. Thank you very much for your supports indeed! Cheers mate.
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